but any comments welcome.

Cheers.
🙂

Any comments?

Well, to be honest, they’re a bit on the small side, and it might be worth zapping those dust spots, and positioning yourself so you are not shooting into sun.

BUT.. the main thing is you were keen enough to go and record the event, and you took the trouble to post them here, so it has been a worthwhile exercise, and if you keep at it, you are sure to get better and better. 🙂