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A weird place to post it (an aviation forum!!) but here is a poem i have written about anxiety problems i have had in recent years (thankfullt now resolved):

The tunnel of anxiety

The door slams shut

Darkness gatherโ€™s whilst legs collapse under mental strain

Hands to ears, Chin to chest, roll over in a ball

A feeling of rage descends from the deep lonely mind

A move to fresh air fails as the body falls again

Tears stream into the waterfall of anxiety

The train of despair screams and grinds through the tunnel

Still no light, still no end

Pistons of arms flail like axes

Hopeless in a tunnel with no escape

No pleasure, no relief

When will it end?

A strange feeling surfaces from the mist of self-pity

Then light once again appears

Opening the mind to freedom

Itโ€™s all overโ€ฆfor now.

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By: Ren Frew - 27th April 2006 at 08:35

Well done Thorny, a problem I can relate to from teenage years. Getting things off your chest like that makes a big difference as I’m sure you know already.

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By: steve rowell - 27th April 2006 at 04:29

Nearly right here goes insurmountable!!! whats spelling amoung friends huh. ๐Ÿ˜‰

You were almost right Anna……..”among”

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By: Mark9 - 26th April 2006 at 16:31

duuuhhhh!!!! thanks anna!!

Always a pleasure ๐Ÿ˜‰ Anna ๐Ÿ˜‰

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By: holty - 26th April 2006 at 16:30

duuuhhhh!!!! thanks anna!!

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By: Mark9 - 26th April 2006 at 16:17

incermountable is probably the wrong spelling…..maybe the wrong word entirely!!!

Nearly right here goes insurmountable!!! whats spelling amoung friends huh. ๐Ÿ˜‰

Nice poem by the way ๐Ÿ˜‰ Anna ๐Ÿ˜‰

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By: holty - 26th April 2006 at 15:44

incermountable is probably the wrong spelling…..maybe the wrong word entirely!!!

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By: holty - 26th April 2006 at 15:43

stange how certain talents come to the surface when faced with seemingly incermountable opposition, whether it be physical or mental. very expresive prose there thorney. i can certainly relate to it from my past problems. well done you!!!!

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By: Arm Waver - 26th April 2006 at 15:27

Nicely done Thorny
Glad to know you are over it

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