Hope you don’t mind, but I’ve tried a bit of a re-write-

I Really, liked your re-write of my story, can I use it?(alright not a complete carbon copy, but just bits and stuff!)

Damn good though!

OK, aside from more historical inaccuracies than you can shake a stick at! What DID you like about the stories, like I said in my first post, these stories have gaps and I’m only doing them for fun! (and to try to get them posted on a website!)
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Thanks guys, keep going with it, I’m in the process of a major re-write.
The story isn’t supposed to be that historically accurate, its like a Hollywood film, great to watch, not very accurate.
If anyone has any ideas please send ’em in.
You should read one of my mates stories, he’s good, but its not very accurate, but I like reading it.
One example for his story writing is that he has Me-262’s up against Mk.24 Spitfires!

What are they gonna do with the Skyraider, surely they must restore it!

Great pictures though, i’ve always wanted to know what happened to the NA.39 gate guard.:D

If a film contains ANY Armed Forces other than the US, then they’ll lose for sure!

If anyones reading either Some Random Stuff, or Cold War Mk.II. I have some advice.
In Some Random Stuff, only read the first nine pages, skip the rest! (unless you want to be bored to death)
In Cold War Mk.II, skip the first eighteen pages, then it gets kinda interesting!