Hey not bad, like me u seem to think everyone is gonna jump up and start laughing or pointing the finger and telling u how rubbish ur work is but that ain’t half bad.
I can actually relate to the story, although thankfully I’ve never found myself lying in a pool of blood 🙂 .

As I have been told when it comes to my stories, just keep at it and take the bad remarks as well as the good. Where did the idea come from if u don’t mind me asking?

Did my A/S levels a few years back, Environmental Science, Media Stuides, English Language and Biology. All I can say is what has probably been siad to u a thousand times, get ur head down and do ur best.

Oh, and don’t listen to the old ******s who keep telling the world that education isn’t as hard as it used to be. My uncle always used to come out with that c*** and it made me so mad 😡

ALL TOGETHER NOW “AUTOBOT’S…TRANSFORM AND ROLL OUT” :p

Better be Galvatron as the bad guy, Megatron was a loser…although he did kill Optimus Prime…sob…sob

Speaking of which, Rodimus Prime…he was gay right??? :diablo:

Yes, happy Birthday…
despite the fact that u don’t know me I have decided to send u a present, it is a state of the art camcorder, plasma screen tv and the latest top of the range PC.
In order to avoid damage I have clearly listed the items on the packaging….in hindsight I don’t think this was a good idea u’ll probably never see it 🙁 , oh well, it’s the thought that counts :p

Happy Birthday

Well like I said I often try my hand at modern military, and with that post u’ve probably written more than I ever have trying to think of ways to start wars. I’m currently working on an Iranian invasion of the Omani territory bordering the Strait of Hormuz to seal off the Persian Gulf as the initial act of war. Except I feel like it’s a case of “been there, done that” and so far I have gotten as far as “The” 😀

Thanks for taking the time to read it, I know it needs a bit of work. It was actually just something I was toying with at work, I was bored and started scribbling when a mate of mine looked across and snatched the piece of paper from me. After he read it he said “Why don’t you take the idea and a try to build on it.”
The story you just read took something like two hours to create, so yeah it is very basic and really does need to be looked at. I’d be happy to re-post it once the final piece is finished.
I might just take up some of your ideas and see what fits best.

As far as the horror genre is concerned, I actually normally try my hand at modern war fiction but I find it takes a lot of research and you have to think of a plausable idea…whereas horror is just using yur imagination. 🙂